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Post  Sanjiv on Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:38 pm

Well I'm just plannin' to make a demo album...

Here are some of my works... Am just a beginner in this rap writin shit! aiight???
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You don't even know me

Post  Sanjiv on Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:41 pm

You don't even know me:

Intro:

You want to have sex wit me
and want me to insert my dick in yo' cunt? (what?)
Wait, You don't even know me (at all!)

Chorus: (2x)

Don't be so corny, you don't even know me
Don't be so horny, you don't even know me
Don't be so phony, you don't even know me
Anyways, don't be eager to know me...
Cause you know Im'a fuckin' kill thee...

Verse 1:

Dawg, I'm good when I am in the mood...
If you ask someone in my neighbourhood
They'll say Extasy's (Sanjiv's) a dude
You will see me making out wit all real good
That's just 'cause its me
and you can't be me
cause homie, you don't even know me (hahaha)
What the fuck are you tryin' to prove?
You wanna fight me?
See fella, This ain't never gonna be...
When you meet me, Im'a brain wash you
I'll screw you, I'll sue you, chew you, like I don't even know you
You won't even have a clue
That's too taboo...
And then we'll play a game
In which the loser has to make a tattoo
On his own upper arm, of the person who wins...
This is how the game ends, and now the game begins... (the game)

Chorus: (2x)

Don't be so corny, you don't even know me
Don't be so horny, you don't even know me
Don't be so phony, you don't even know me
Anyways, don't be eager to know me...
Cause you know Im'a fuckin' kill thee...


Verse 2:

If you ever beef wit me,
Im-a kick you and it will make you hallucinate
I will keep on doin' this 'til you keep losing weight...
Ah crap...
This ain't rap...
I am a good person
But very egoistic and arrogant
I'm just tellin ya this, so that you will start knowin' me
I'm always calm and cool til you come and knock at my door
Then we meet, have a chat for like 5 minutes
Then you start knowing the dark side of me
My true colors yo...
I can make yo' life go miserable
you won't even be able, to move a table
I ain't got that amount of bad mouth (do I?)
Fuck, boobs, dicks, pussies, cunts,
That's all I can say now
I can be a prick, if you piss me off
I don't even need your attention
I don't need your advise
I don't need your attitude
Cause am good with mine...
I can be mad, I can be whatever you want me to be
That's why its good that you don't know me (hahaha)

Chorus: (2x)

Don't be so corny, you don't even know me
Don't be so horny, you don't even know me
Don't be so phony, you don't even know me
Anyways, don't be eager to know me...
Cause you know Im'a fuckin' kill thee...

Outro:

Now what the fuck you want from me?
Go get a life you dicknose...
Hate me? Then why did you ask dumbshit about me?
That's why I tell to many unknown people "Good that you don't know me"
Its all good if you don't know me...
Even if you don't know me
Please do buy my C.D.
And put some money in my pocket!!! (hahaha)


~peace~
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Re: My new album works

Post  brain damaged on Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:30 pm

ql, this shit is wacked !!! good work... I planned to record some stuff, but I dont have a studio or conditions to do that...
I'll see maybe I'll put some of my raps here(it is gonna be hard to translate it to english, but I'll try)
I rap about hoes, drugs and murders and shit like that but I make it funny, not grouse(ok mybe some are, but...)
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Post  Sanjiv on Mon Nov 10, 2008 9:31 pm

Oh shit, you really liked it??? First i thought i would be gettin' all bad remarks, buh many people have appreciated it! Thanks mayn...

Yo sure, raps should be funny as fuck - Like Eminem's!!!
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Re: My new album works

Post  Bunny Rabbit on Mon Nov 10, 2008 11:29 pm

yo sanjiv......
gr8 wrk bugg..........i'ma sure ya gonna spitt the best as tym goes onn
best luck
keep rhymin'

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Re: My new album works

Post  Sanjiv on Tue Nov 11, 2008 12:33 am

ayo thnx bud!

The Album tracklist is as follows:-

The Mental Release Tracklist: -

01. Intro
02. Announcement
03. Save the planet Earth
04. You don't even know me
05. Ain't no racist (Feat. Rubber smokin' Flippers)
06. Rap name
07. Hate you more
08. I never give a fuck
09. Fuck all rules
10. I can just rap
11. Fake rappers (Akon diss) (Feat. Criminal)
12. Fuck censorship
13. Been there, done that!
14. Speak your mind
15. Don't do drugs
16. I'm a bad influence

(Disk 2)

01. Just rhymin' (Freestyle)
02. You can't be me
03. Retarded Soul
04. Album (Interview)

I am done writin with some 5-6 songs...tongue
Im'a upload the lyrics soon...
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Re: My new album works

Post  ravina on Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:25 am

hey awesome work yaa... happy 2222..gud as a beginner!!!!!!first tym u tryin sumthin lyk dis na? surprised !!!!!!! wow!!l luved it!!!!!!! 1 new fan! tongue
keep up d good work!!!!!! gud luck............
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Post  Bunny Rabbit on Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:19 pm

w8in fo ya shytt......

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Post  Sanjiv on Sat Nov 15, 2008 6:55 pm

ravina wrote:hey awesome work yaa... happy 2222..gud as a beginner!!!!!!first tym u tryin sumthin lyk dis na? surprised !!!!!!! wow!!l luved it!!!!!!! 1 new fan! tongue
keep up d good work!!!!!! gud luck............

yeah... lolz
thnx a lot cheers
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Post  Shaq on Sat Nov 15, 2008 7:06 pm

this is very good shit. you must send me songs when you record it. and for song You don't even know me try it sing whit beat of song puke of eminem. i tryed and to me seems very good but i change beat on few parts of song
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Post  Sanjiv on Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:24 am

yo i tried it too mayn... sounds dope... \:d/
Nah basically I make beats fo myself and have a few friends who also produce... So this is how Ima make the album...
Btw thnx a lot mayn!
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Save the Planet Earth

Post  Sanjiv on Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:42 am

This is another song from the album I wrote yesterday... wink

Intro:
Mother Earth... we love you
How many motherfuckers are proud to be a citizen of this beautiful planet of ours???
save our planet dawgs...
I just wanna create a general awareness so that we can save our planet Earth!!!
I dedicate this song to all the people livin' on this Earth
You won't find many rhymes this time
Ayo, I want everyone to listen to the words of this song
I ain't doin' no crime by savin' my planet... it you think i am, then u wrong...

Verse 1:
I will never dream about such stuff unless we all take the intention to make this earth a betta place...
Or afta some years, we all may have to go and stay on planet mars!
There also we will discriminate about race!
Lemme make this song by adding a good beat and a fabulous base
So lemme start,
First we gotta make a resolution to stop this fuckin' pollution
To save this nation
stop killin the animals
we say they are our friends... buh we 'stil kill 'em?
Conserve Energy, or some day we ain't gonna get no electricity
Say no to plastics, can't we just find any other thing other than this shitty plastic paper?
I may be the first rapper to rap about saving our planet!
But i have the right to make sucha rap song
Plant trees, to get more breeze
Once when I was thinkin about how to save the earth
Nobody couldn't see the shit I felt
So save water, save mankind
Keep that in yo' mind
Buh in the mean time, sing the chorus, here it goes...

Chorus:
What if some day the sun wouldn't be there?
what if some day the sun wouldn't be there?
full-a smoke smoke everywhere
full-a smoke smoke everywhere
What if you don't get no drop of water?
What if you don't get no breeze from the trees?
So what! Think about it... Save the planet...
Save the planet (The Earth)

Verse 2:
All the ice, now just water
Its so difficult to live without water
All the ice, now just water
Its so difficult to live without water
think...
All the trees are just being cut
whoever is doin this, is a big nut!
All livin people and love is just dyin'
Am trying, to put an end to this
But I can't stop or bare these people's cryin'
think......!
All the smoke comin out from the factories
look at all the poison comin out because of these industries
The water which we are drinkin
don't know what will happen to us
plus, people ain't gettin no food to eat
In the street, I see so many people ain't gettin' no clothes to wear
I swear...
People not aware of any happenings
Some may still be thinkin we are ruled by a king!
there are poor people sufferin from malnutrition
They don't even get no education
think...
Somewhere there's floods
In some hood, there ain't no water
Somewhere there's blasts
Dunno 'til when this will last
Dunno why these motherfuckers... do this kinda stuff
Somebody gets everythin he wants
Money, The fortune and the fame
That Means we'll end up burning in hell scorching in flames
and somebody sleeps in hunger, malnourished
think...
so what!
Mother Earth's crackin dawgs
all because of us, the main problem to this is we
Other than that is that the mother Earth's crackin
all because of us, the main problem to this is we!
What if we wouldn't think about this
Some day this planet will come to an end
think... (now)
Save earth from gettin' messed up like some other planets
think yo...
How much easy would it be
if so many motherfuckin' people think the way I do, just like me?!
And its absurd how people hang on every word I say.
They panic, and then commit suicide
this is it, last time, we should put a fuckin end to this shit!
And If I ever leave this Earth -- that would be the death of me first.
Hahaha one more time sing the chorus, how does it go?!
yo...

Chorus: (2x)
What if some day the sun wouldn't be there?
what if some day the sun wouldn't be there?
full-a smoke smoke everywhere
full-a smoke smoke everywhere
What if you don't get no drop of water?
What if you don't get no breeze from the trees?
So what! Think about it... Save the planet...
Save the planet (The Earth)


Outro:
Yo.. once again I'm sayin
save our planet
after all - we are the responsible people of this world
y'knowwhatI'msayin?
Ima hope you will change and do some better shit fo this world
other than just wasting your time by planting bombs and stuff
hahahaha
peace!
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Post  brain damaged on Sun Nov 16, 2008 1:48 am

its cool, but I prefer the first one.
in my opinion you should get your own rap style, not copying someone other... this is from "white america", isnt it?
you rhyme it good, but I dunno... try to find your own...
on infinite eminem tryed to be like other rappers, he didnt have his own style that album is almost nothing(altrough it has good lyrics and shit) in compare with the SSLP
peace Wink
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Post  Sanjiv on Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:30 pm

Yo I know the intro is a bit like white america... n that If I ever leave earth that would be the death of me first.
is from 'Til I collapse... that's it
yeah i know that yo... Im'a try to do what u said...
thnx!
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Re: My new album works

Post  Shaq on Sun Nov 16, 2008 6:26 pm

Sanjiv wrote:yo i tried it too mayn... sounds dope... \:d/
Nah basically I make beats fo myself and have a few friends who also produce... So this is how Ima make the album...
Btw thnx a lot mayn!

i'm glad that you like it :)
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Speak your mind

Post  Sanjiv on Sat Dec 20, 2008 12:41 am

Intro :

This ain't no diss song to any particular person...
This is just my general shit
wit some offensive lines and rhymes...

Verse 1 :

I'm here, and I don’t need no introduction
Doin’ what I do best, that’s abusive reduction
I use ma gangsta ways to help niggas in deduction
Bitches love me, coz they love ma way of seduction

Never ever interfere or imma kill you with my gun
You don’t know me, am a gangsta on the run
Whatever I do has to have intended pun
Did I mention? I make RnG for fun

When I fuck bitches they say they love ma cream
While you remain nymphomaniac… frustrated with that wet dream
It shows in your raps, which are way of beam
So damn sick, like a ball without seam...

Yeah I'm here, its time to fear
My raps are filthy shit, impossible to bear
Now that’s getting over, im-a make one thing clear
Fuck off from here… if your life is dear (to you)
This is the end of this verse bro
Buhbye momo…
Fucking homo!!!

Chorus :

So bitch speak only what's on your mind
Don't bitch about me from behind
I know everything you say, you do, cause I ain't blind
So speak your mind...

Verse 2 :

Okay… now this is the last time I am dissin’ you…
Here ma lil’ fellow… am finishing you
Say bye to your mom, she just might me missing you
Loosen up your gay jeans a bit, they might be squishing you

Just because I called you a fuckin' Nazi...
You changed your Godamn photo ID
But what will happen to you boy?
You have been affected by HIV
But listen to me boy, changing that doesn’t affect crap
Your ass would still be handed back to you in a gift wrap
Oh! One more thing I forgot to say…
In your raps you do sound gay
Fuck you really make say that you a real gay

I don’t feel like continuing …
Things are not so satisfying
You’ve got your own complications
Things to deal with – Shity education
Why don’t you sort those?
And then come, come to me with your ripped clothes

When you say I wear designer cargoes with designer logos
You made that didn’t you? Ma precious lil’ mofo
But you know who does this kind of shit though?
It’s them the fucking homos
Fuck I forgot…you one of them…
With you commitment to one of your boyfriends
The one on which all your money you spend
The one for which you down you bend
Hahaha…

This 'stil ain't the end boy… you better be steady
Cause boy, it’s gonna be heavy
Its time to face prosecution
Your time to deal against prostitution
Let’s just say… Its time for me to leave this fucking rap profession

Chorus :

So bitch speak only what's on your mind
Don't bitch about me from behind
I know everything you say, you do, cause I ain't blind
So speak your mind...

Verse 3 :

You fag, fag boy – Take over not possible
Wit all that shit about my family – Impossible!
You think you’re hot with all that crap?
Junior! That mamma thing was over in the 90’s craaaaaaaaaaak!
You think you’re hot again with your rhymes?
That shit is old don’t be screaming dawg!!!
Im'a have a running for your life when am at you dog
And hey, that dick thing man… you gotta be kidding
Look down, take a gaze, you ain’t got nothing
You say you got no dick? Fuck you man!
You desperate son of a pig im'a take over you man
Cause the last time you heard my rap
You pissed in your fucking pants – Damn!
Don’t be angry, this is just a game and am the winner
Don’t stop cleaning you’re sweat… Cause it’s going inner
You started this shit and stated men as gays
Goddamn! You muhfucker, I leave you ass for hay
Haha…
You’re hot man talking on little guys
Sheesh! You think I was gonna give up with all that ‘F’ shit… that’s nice
Whenever I come online… people start to shiver
Not like you gay, shit it’s a respect fever
Talking about hay
Hey hey
Well done hay
Bitch with me say
Whoop your ass on Friday
Make it open prick, okay?
Damn... pop off your gay
Am your friend – You’re critic and your brother
If you come again, its sader

Chorus :

So bitch speak only what's on your mind
Don't bitch about me from behind
I know everything you say, you do, cause I ain't blind
So speak your mind...

Verse 4 :

Fucka time to bring the heat
Am the only kid who raps on this beat!
It looks like you have only rapped for weeks
Yo! What’s these bitches winning steaks
Lost man who ever to you, was a fluke
When I read your raps... all I did was puke
He horribly hides em’
Nobody ever lied to him
Look at the words
Son, this shows that you are a nerd
My words do slur
My rhymes bark and yours they just purr

You make me feel like I'm in the middle school still
You squeal like a little girl, you pitiful chill…
We’re gonna fuck... I just popped this little blue pill
You can leave now, buh wait I gotta shit on you still!

Now say with me perverts…
“I smoke like Marley, Stay brown like Charlie”

“Rather be buried then be worried…”

That's why I say...

Chorus :

So bitch speak only what's on your mind
Don't bitch about me from behind
I know everything you say, you do, cause I ain't blind
So speak your mind...

Outro

And that’s it… This is ma first rap shit…
I know you all liked it
And if you hate it… Just suck ma fucking Dick
That’s it…
Buy my shit… And put more money in ma damn pocket
This is the longest rap in the whole mental release album...
Just know that I don't give a Fuck,
Nor do I live amuk
But whatever it is, speak your mothafuckin' mind!!! (laughs)
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Re: My new album works

Post  Shaq on Sat Dec 20, 2008 5:14 am

this song is really great. i don't know what to say, just great. did u record any song ??? i would really like to listen your songs
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Post  brain damaged on Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:15 pm

great song xD
I love the best part with "nazi"

my friends called me nazi cause I wear iron cross on clothes O.o
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Post  Sanjiv on Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:47 pm

Yo thanks a lot guyz
yeah i tried recording y'know on one of those And1 basketball beats... sounded pretty good tho!
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Post  Shaq on Sat Dec 20, 2008 6:27 pm

brain damaged wrote:great song xD
I love the best part with "nazi"

my friends called me nazi cause I wear iron cross on clothes O.o

my birth date is same like hitlers XD
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Post  Shaq on Sat Dec 20, 2008 6:31 pm

and maybe in the chours u should put so (bitch ) speak your mind
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Re: My new album works

Post  Bunny Rabbit on Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:59 pm

mayn dis shytt is damn ossum.......
wud surely luv to hear
do record it as soon as poss....rhymes are too gud
gr8 goin bud........

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